Monday, 8 April 2013

#8 - No Regrets

So, this morning, uninspired as of yet, I decided to give the NaPoWriMo daily prompt a try.  The prompt, being the eight day of April, is to write a poem in Ottava Rima, an eight line stanza that follows the ABABABCC rhyme scheme and is written in Iambic Pentameter (10 syllables per line with the accents stressed as such: da dum, da dum, da dum, da dum, da dum)

So with a form in mind, I still needed a topic.  I asked Kirstin.  She said, "Why don't you write a poem about us?"  Alrighty, what better topic could there be?  

I got the math right, the eight lines and the number of syllables, but the deliberate use of accent is definitely a stretch, so I don't think that the poem reads as well as it would if I had the luxury to vary the lines.

Regardless, it was fun to do.  Here's today's poem:

My four, my children are my legacy,
The worn jewel in my crown, that shines bright,
A mark of that which is the best of me,
No regrets have I; I have done this right,
I live for them, and they exist for me,
Dreams unachieved, my four children still might,
Accomplish all that they set out to do,
Pursue their talents, true happiness, too.

Alex, our first, nine before summer's close,
The bud of an artist runs in his veins,
Quick with numbers and a new love of prose,
Sensitive, carefully we hold the reins.
Connor, six now, his social circle grows,
Daring, he trusts, collects bruises and stains,
Creative, he sketches with clarity,
Gentleness beneath the fire that is he.

Kirstin, big sister, feminine, and sweet,
At four, a dancer, a singer, friendly,
Verbally blessed, Affectionate, and neat.
Baby Brooklynn, completes our family,
Bright and alert, gummy grins are our treat,
Skills undiscovered, my fourth prodigy.
To watch my heart beat on in another,
No regrets have I to be their mother.


- Laura Freeman -
April 8, 2013

Sunday, 7 April 2013

# 7 - The Indigestible Truth

Okay, this poem deserves a little preface.  Or a brag.  Whatever you want to call it is fine with me.  Cory and I have been following the Weight Watchers Points Plus program since January 3rd. My Mom's been doing it longer. We've all been very successful on it and we've all recently met our first goal, "Lose10% of your body weight." (Ironically, Cory's and my combined ten percents is 100% of Alex!)  I am, in fact, now at my pre-pregnancy weight for ALL four of my pregnancies!  I'm pretty pleased with that.  I haven't been this size since 2003.  And 2003 was the year I lost 30 pounds of post-wedding fat in order to get pregnant, so I wasn't actually this size for very long back then.  And Cory is officially at his pre-pregnancies weight, too.  So I guess you could say we're both now starting to chip away at the weight we gained between when we got together and began"cooking" for ourselves and when we became a family of three.  A lot of take-out in our early years of marriage, if I recall correctly... 
So when it was suggested that we go to the J&S Restaurant for dinner last night (I won't say which one of us suggested it), knowing that there is absolutely nothing on that menu that we can easily calculate the points on, we decided we deserved it.  And we do.  So we went and we had a wonderful time with the kids and thoroughly enjoyed ourselves.  Which was the inspiration for this morning's poem.

Three short months of working hard,
And the mind wants what it wants,
A reward for twenty lost pounds,
Dinner at the local restaurant.
Wholesome out the window,
We called it our cheat meal.
Laughter, games, desert,
A lovely family deal.
With the spirit of a teenager,
A cheeseburger, fries, and pie,
Now the body of an older woman,
Utters its punishing war cry.
In the wee hours of the morning,
My stomach rebelling from the score,
I come to the sobering conclusion,
I can't eat like that anymore.


- Laura Freeman -
April 7, 2013

Saturday, 6 April 2013

#6 It's grocery day!


Two of them vote pizza,

One wants mac and cheese,

One suggests spaghetti,

How `bout Fruit Loops, please?

Candy, cake, and cookies

The fourth just smiles at me.



Two suggest waffles,

Grilled cheese shouts the third,

One suggests PB and J,

Fruit Loops, again, I think I heard.

Three agree on crackers,

The fourth one doesn't say a word.



Pizza is now unanimous,

Rice Krispies would be fine,

Please can we have ice cream

Chocolate milk is so divine.

Pasta, bagels, tacos,

The fourth one starts to whine.



I envisioned broccoli,

Maybe chicken, rice or fish,

So much for group consensus,

On the weekly grocery list.

Next week I`ll plan it myself,

The family nutritionist.


- Laura Freeman -
April 6, 2013

Friday, 5 April 2013

#5 - Mother Nature


Mother Nature is a cruel mistress,
Who taunts then takes away,
At nightfall, dusts the world in white,
The spring promise of today.
Winter throws us one last backwards glance,
As we watch him finally go,
And leaves us in his awful wake,
A Spring of ice and snow.


- Laura Freeman -
April 5, 2013

Thursday, 4 April 2013

#4 - Bright Eyed



Big brown eyes that light,
Sweet excitement from within,
Wiggling, kicking legs,
Cooing, drooly grin
Alert and ready to begin.

She wants to play with me,
She tries to tempt me in,
She flaps her arms, calls to me,
Except, it's two a.m.
Caffeine, you'll be my friend,

- Laura Freeman -
April 4, 2013

Wednesday, 3 April 2013

#3 - It Doesn't Have To

What is that?
He asked
sneering.
A poem,
She grins.
No.
It doesn't rhyme.
It doesn't have to.
It's free-verse.
A poem?
A poem that doesn't rhyme?
Free verse.
I don't like it,
He grumbled.
You don't have to.
It's mine.
Make it rhyme!
No.
Please?
No.
It doesn't have to.
I don't like it!
Scowling.
She laughs.
You don't have to.
I don't get it.
It doesn't rhyme.
Glaring.
It doesn't have to!
He pleads,
one more time.
Make
It
Rhyme!
It's free verse,
It doesn't have to.
He
S
T
O
M
P
S
away.
She smiles.
Tomorrow,
A Haiku.


- Laura Freeman -
April 3, 2013

Tuesday, 2 April 2013

# 2 - "Dear Lily,"




You meow and meow, my indoor cat.
You pace across the floor.
The birds outside, they beckon you,
You crouch beside the door.
The kids come home, and you slip out,
I swoop and bring you in,
You cry at me,
So pitifully,
Imprisoned once again.
You sit at our front window,
Scowling at the chirping prey.
I remind you that, last time you roamed,
You ended up
At the SPCA.
So you'll stay inside, we'll keep you safe,
You'll probably resent us.
But Lily, dear, you had your chance,
Before you even met us.
I wouldn't let my cats run loose,
With all the hazards that await.
Please understand, the indoor life,
For a cat, it can be great! 
You perch upon my counter,
When I sleep, you walk across my hair.

You trip me in the hallway,

You steal my warm spot on the chair,

You sleep all day, you play all night,
You go randomly berserk,
You can be the biggest sweetheart,
Or act like a selfish jerk. 
You are waited on, both hand and foot,
Food at your beck and call,
You sleep right on our pillows,
Leave hairballs in the hall.
So when we tell you, "Stay inside,"
I really wish you could,
Understand that we're not being cruel,
It is for your own good.

- Laura Freeman -
April 2, 2013