"This, like the “American” cinquain, is a poem based on syllables, with the pattern
being 5-7-5-7-7. They work best when those final two 7-syllable lines contain a sort
of turn or surprise that the first three lines might not wholly anticipate. You can
string a bunch of them together to make a multi-stanza poem, or just write one!"
being 5-7-5-7-7. They work best when those final two 7-syllable lines contain a sort
of turn or surprise that the first three lines might not wholly anticipate. You can
string a bunch of them together to make a multi-stanza poem, or just write one!"
Midnight Exchange
In
the dark of night,
She
slips in to my bedroom,Promising pleasure,
She is satisfied and she
Leaves money, the Tooth Fairy.
- Laura Freeman -
April 11, 2013
1 comment:
cute (and I never heard of this tantun either) hope I spelled that right
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